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GravyFries
Spoiler alert: Han Solo dies :3
craftking178
"Omg that's good" my gf She isn't lying
Cath
aww ;-;
Cath
will do :3
Danilem
Face is good, though the neck is somewhat thick and short. The lightsaber however rather looks meh. It does not have szraight symmetrical lines, which gives it a feeling of being made by an amateur engineer from junk and trash. Also, this is not Anakin's lightsaber, which is why i shall add an other sin to this pic.
assassiniv
i dont like this one 
Unusual Brit
Eh, its ok. Its just the lips seem a bit fat idk
Cath
It's not a lightsaber in the first place. It's the long stick thing Rey has. Also, it was from this image https://media1.popsugar-assets.com/files/thumbor/QvQAGvRQwnU2PCUmfRUB6_rtW_Q/fit-in/2048xorig/filters:format_auto-!!-:strip_icc-!!-/2015/12/30/898/n/1922283/8bf3cee0_edit_img_image_39514428_1451354400_728x728/i/Who-Rey-Parents-Star-Wars-Force-Awakens.jpg
Cath
Thank you for your constructive criticism, very useful. -.-"
assassiniv
idk, its just... i cant explain
assassiniv
the lips are wierd
Fr_
I think the issue with the lips (this applies to the rest of the picture as well) is how they don't quite blend in. You should try and focus more on how to shade and make smoother overlaps. It is a little harder with ink, but not impossible.
Hirdragnur
This is really, really good! And I actually think the lips are done realistically, seeing as it's a desert planet with not much water, her lips -would- look a little out of place. My only complaint? Not Mara Jade. (JK please don't kill me)
Unusual Brit
Not really, but I suppose I'm just being fussy.
Cath
Thanks ;-;
Hirdragnur
So, out of curiosity, do you do requests at all?