You definitely need some grammar and spelling check, along with a deep understanding of whom this book is going to appeal to (for instance, I'm completely unthrilled by this idea of your's).
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Dark Duo
Not to interested in character RP when I don't have control over who my character is, sorry
I already know what its gonna be about and its older readers, i also started this in 5th grade and only just upgrading it, i also didn't really explain it good and i'll admit it. Tell me what you want to know and i'll answer it
you don't have to choose a main character, the main characters are there just in case someone wanted to be one. If you made your own character you would have your own story