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Help Me PLS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ajroets said:
[quote user_id="9478990" avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/Evakobold/74.png" name="Evakobold"][quote user_id="2931363" avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/Mr_CookieSmurf/74.png" name="Mr_CookieSmurf"][quote user_id="1636591" avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/Only_God/74.png" name="Only_God"] But actually this lavish and outright computer privilege inaugurated when I was approximately 13 of age. My parent's seized to care considering I perpetually infringed on my limited computer time regulations :p
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This but then in normal English.[/quote]

It is not even correct.[/quote]
"outright computer privilege"

I believe computer should be an adjective.

This started when you were 13 of age? 13 what? Emus? Kilograms?

I think there should be a comma between "actually" and "this"?

"seized" should be "ceased".

There should be a comma after "care".

When you say "limited computer time regulations", you're saying that the regulations are limited. My guess is that your computer time is limited, not your regulations. (even though it's perfectly understandable, I figured I'd point it out anyway.

Aaaaand, period at the end.[/quote]
"Ceased" explains why the site was complaining, ty x3. And yes, my grammar isn't the same standard as my lexicon word memorization. I am fully aware that there are grammar errors in my texts ^^
 
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