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How do you write a story?
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Dude, your stories aren't the best in the world. If I had the time to write out stories, I could make some spectacular ones but running consumes too much of my time. Dude, I have to write a 4800 minimum vignette on my Mango Street :furious:[/quote]
C'mon Akam. I want to hear one of your award winning, non-fiction series about the secrets to running.
Lagy_Paladin/Andrew
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Dude, your stories aren't the best in the world. If I had the time to write out stories, I could make some spectacular ones but running consumes too much of my time. Dude, I have to write a 4800 minimum vignette on my Mango Street :furious:[/quote]
C'mon Akam. I want to hear one of your award winning, non-fiction series about the secrets to running.
:O Prometheus has more likes then posts this is a new record
'Cos everyone likes his posts cos they think cos he's former staff they think he's a good person to have on your side. at least that's how i see it
He just does a lot of good memes
He is a good and bad person, at times, he needs to let it go with akam and stop harassing him, and he makes good points on stuff without akam
TheShadower7
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Example:
'Run, steve, run!' shouted Sam.
Steve trampled down the steep hill, tripping on strewn faggots wherever he went. His bony legs were malnourished, Sam sprinted down the hill after Steve - about three dozen zombies and spiders moaning and screeching; and coming down after them. Sam took his iron blade out of his sheath, blocking many arrows - but had an arrow to the knee. Sam tumbled backwards to the dreamy forest. Steve's foot was limp and Sam's knee was shot. The monsters were drawing nearer and nearer... The air changed from stuffy to - clear; everything felt slow - then someone jumped from a nearby tree, and transformed the monsters to nothing. Steve and Sam gasped, and were in empty shock. The figure has a long black beard, with pointy eyebrows, a bald face with black bulging eyes.
'Who are you, daring to enter the forest of Notch?' he demanded
This is just an example of a mini-story I made.
Characters: Steve, Sam and a mysterious Guardian of the Forest..
Setting: The Forest of Notch
Villains: Monsters
ETC ETC.
'Run, steve, run!' shouted Sam.
Steve trampled down the steep hill, tripping on strewn faggots wherever he went. His bony legs were malnourished, Sam sprinted down the hill after Steve - about three dozen zombies and spiders moaning and screeching; and coming down after them. Sam took his iron blade out of his sheath, blocking many arrows - but had an arrow to the knee. Sam tumbled backwards to the dreamy forest. Steve's foot was limp and Sam's knee was shot. The monsters were drawing nearer and nearer... The air changed from stuffy to - clear; everything felt slow - then someone jumped from a nearby tree, and transformed the monsters to nothing. Steve and Sam gasped, and were in empty shock. The figure has a long black beard, with pointy eyebrows, a bald face with black bulging eyes.
'Who are you, daring to enter the forest of Notch?' he demanded
This is just an example of a mini-story I made.
Characters: Steve, Sam and a mysterious Guardian of the Forest..
Setting: The Forest of Notch
Villains: Monsters
ETC ETC.
TheShadower7
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sure. Have it by Monday :3
2000 words? :shock: When I write an essay I barely get 300-400 words.If any of you writers are feeling brave you can write my essay titled "Give a brief overview of the geology of north Wales" - 2000 words, citing at least 3 creditable resources (so no websites).
MD K47
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2000 words? :shock: When I write an essay I barely get 300-400 words.[/quote][quote user_id="4728495" avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/MD_K47/74.png" name="MD_K47"]If any of you writers are feeling brave you can write my essay titled "Give a brief overview of the geology of north Wales" - 2000 words, citing at least 3 creditable resources (so no websites
Same problem here
The ability to laugh at yourself is always a good trait, and one I don't believe Akam has. If he wants to make a meme involving me, then I shall enjoy a chuckle about it!
The ability to laugh at yourself is always a good trait, and one I don't believe Akam has. If he wants to make a meme involving me, then I shall enjoy a chuckle about it![/quote]
Well, I'm not saying your wrong, but it can be kinda hurtful if every single meme that one person makes is about you
Has every meme I've made involved Akam? I don't think so.
I know what ya mean Prom. I would laugh too. Any kind of offense in meme from to me, is hard to get mad at.
Dude just read my stories and you'll be good
While I personally enjoy reading your stories, I wouldn't refer other players to you. If I were to be a little critical of it, I'd mention the excellent use of transitional words (for the most part), and a good sense of vocabulary that certainly gives it life. Yet, I feel as though grammatically you could really improve, along with better sentence and story structure. Those comma splices certainly give me a headache.
Just stating my opinion. (Which is evident because I'm saying it.
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