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The State of the Bards

The long-awaited time has come. My bard application:

Thrak

The sun shined down upon the head of the dwarf Thrak. He grunted into his copious beard and squinted. He didn’t like the sun, preferring instead the dark halls of the city of Dwarodelf, deep in the Morannorian Mountains, that stretched from north to south, creating a natural divide in the heart of Ardruidor. He hefted his backpack, full of odds and ends, and with a clink and a rattle as the various axes, knives, hammers, and the mail of his armour all collided in a harmonious mingling of metal-on-metal clashes. The sun was beginning to set, and Thrak knew what preyed on travelers upon the Old King Road at night. He quickened his pace, and as many know, dwarves can, when their minds are set upon it, move very quickly across terrain. Shortly before nightfall, Thrak came to the part of the road that went through a narrow ravine, the most notorious part of the Old King Road. In the days of yore, when men had not been weak, the dwarves more trusting, and the goblins too scared to climb out of their cesspits, travelers would stay in the ravine because its high walls protected them well from the elements. Not anymore. The goblins now raided more and more frequently, and fewer and fewer of the good folks lived in the land west of the mountains. Slowly he rolled everything out along the ground, keeping his various weapons close at hand, he shivered mightily. There was to be no fire tonight. Closer to his home, where the goblins still fear to tread, he might have been willing to light one, but, not trusting the ravine, and knowing, as you probably do what goblins can do.

Ashnaark

The goblin chief growled with pleasure beneath his breath, then glared up at the bright full moon, and around at his mingled troops. He was as most goblins are. Short, but taller than dwarves by about 5 inches, narrow in body and legs, with long gangly-looking arms, ending in clever fingers and claws, which hang down, nearly to the ground. But goblins, for all their narrowness, they are strong and wiry, and have a superb ability of seeing well in the dark. Shuffling his feet he drew his sword and gesticulated to his troops that had gathered near him that they should now move into position. The attack was to be on a small village of courageous peasants, which had moved into the region for the fertile land, which had not been farmed for an age. They had not heeded the warnings of those whom had seen others leave on the same quest, and for that, Ashnaark was grateful. Now, with the harvest over, and the peasants now happy to kick their feet up, they were ripe for a reminder that men could never stand against the might of the goblin. With a silent, downward swing of his scimitar, he initiated the attack. The village sat on the edge of the plain, near the foothills of the Morannorian Mountains, but it was far north of the road to the dwarf’s kingdom. The goblins silently slunk over the small parapet that encircled the village, and then, the fun began. With deafening howls that could have woken the dead, the goblins started to slaughter. Ashnaark moved with lightning speed with 5 of his men to secure the target, the granary of the village. The fighting went on, men spilled out into the streets, clad in naught but night gowns wielding axes and swords. Ashnaark began to smirk at the petty resistance, which soon turned to utter amazement as the men rallied and began to cut down the raiders. With a yell, he and his guard joined the fray, cutting down one man with a quick thrust to the back, but now, the others were aware of him, and some turned and began to engage his guard. Ashnaark had received a small wound to the thigh, a lucky stroke by one of the defenders, but it was painful, and as his guard fought he stepped back to view that battle. It was then that he realized what had happened. The village was not of men. The houses were short and squat, the defenders themselves short, with long beards, broad chests and sholders and short, thick legs firmly planted in the earth. They were dwarves. With a cried command the chief rallied his troops back outside the city, and they fled, with Ashnaark cursing under his breath, into the night.

Thrak

Thrak woke up in the silent dark before morning. There was smoke upon the air, and far away, he could hear the clash and clank of weapons and armour. He immediately packed up his meager sleeping materials, and within thirty seconds, a sleeping bag had joined a bedroll in his backpack. He continued his travels to the outpost village of Wutenlant was going well. As one of the servants of the king, he was tasked with monthly trips to the outlying holds of the dwarves. This particular settlement was one of the main suppliers of food for the main city of Dwarodelf, and as he judged by the smoke and clamour, it was under attack by the goblins. In ages long before, but dimly remembered, the goblins, under their dark lord Marakorthon, had once held in strength, the caves of the Morannorian Mountains, but it was the homeland of the dwarves, and in those long years ago, the entire race of the dwarves rallied in a massive campaign, and drove out the orcish pestilence. They never forgave the stone folks for the defeat of the slaughter of their lord. Now they attempted small forays into the lands of the dwarves, and of hardy men that attempted to live here, so far away from their strongholds in the east and south. Hurrying along the road, all fear of ambush forgotten, he entered the chasm, and moving swiftly along, reached the other side with no more injury than a scraped knee, which he received when he fell into a patch of prickly briar. He was met at the gates of the city by 50 of the armed dwarves. Thrak halted, panting, and, after some recovery, spoke to the guard quickly “I am Thrak, son of Thron, servant of King Thrandin, Lord of the Mountains, I wish to speak with Lord Oroth of Wutenlant.” The guards lowered their weapons and the captain spake solemnly “The Lord Oroth was grievously wounded in the battle with the goblins.” This statement was followed by a pungent oath, and all the guard spat upon the dirt. Thrak grumbled into his beard and not for the first time cursed the goblins. With a sigh, he followed the guards to the citadel of the town where he payed the kings last respects to the mighty lord of Wutenlant. As he knelt grasping the hand of Oroth, he swore he would make the goblins pay for the invasion of his land. As he returned towards the Morranorian Mountains and Dwarodelf. The war awaited.
 
Tis was a mid-winter day, snowing as any would expect. In the Blue Mountains, it wasn't just snowing: a snowstorm seemed to be on the verge of formation. The wind seemed to warn travelers, the experienced and lost alike, to stray away from the mountains. Yet, it also seemed to beckon. . .
But not all was gloomy. A pair of miners were singing aloud, as jolly as could be. They were returning to their dwellings after a day of mining; and were they successful in their mining endeavors? Likely, for their joy and spirit exhibited true happiness. Perhaps they had found gold.
Then, they heard footsteps. Yet not just any footsteps; each step matched with the rhythm of the song. Then clapping, whistling, and the melodious tone of a lute. Finally, a voice sang.
It was a high, clear voice. Talented it was, for the notes were likewise the the chirrups of a bird. The miners instantly felt entranced by it. To put it simply, it was. . . beautiful.
Then, the snow cleared. The two miners looked up from the path, to the snowy slope above. There was the source of the music.
15 dwarves, white-bearded, there stood. They held lutes, flutes, other instruments from that era. These were played with such skill, that not a single mistake, a blur, a imperfection could be heard.
Suddenly, they stopped, all at once. The singer, standing at the front, stepped forward towards the miners. He too had a white beard, but this one was the purest white the miners had ever experienced. Even the white snow seemed to be darker than it. Then, the singer bent down to collect a clump of snow from the ground. Standing up, in front of the miners, he closed his hands around the snow. Opening his hands, a clear, glass trinket hung on a chain from one of his fingers. Yet he closed his hands again, and there was snow.
The miners, amazed by this, flung themselves to the ground in front of him. Out of their sacks and pockets, gold, silver, and jewels they take out.
"Take these." Such says one, presenting the riches to the singer. "You are obviously one of great importance. You are more worthy of these than we will ever be."
But the singer, simply shook his head. "Stand, you two. I do not deserve these any more than you. In fact, you deserve these more. It was your labor, your endeavors, that produced these. Not mine."
Now standing, the other miner asks, "If I may inquire, who are you?"
"I am your servant, and will always be at your service, and all to come," says the singer, "but if you need a name, I am Telchar Snowhelm."
"Nay, you are not our servant," say the miners, "but we are yours. We do not deserve your service, O' mighty Snowhelm. We dwarves are dwarfed in your majesty."
"Well, then you may follow! Companions are always welcome, and the more, the merrier!"
"We will be glad to follow. But if I may ask, where are we heading?"
"We head for the new Nogrod. It has been known that Ered Luin, the great Blue Mountains, is in need of a leader. I hope that I will be able to serve your people well, and bring us to great heights, unseen before."

Thus, Telchar arrived at the new Nogrod. He found it at a dark time; leaderless, much had fallen into despair. Yet when he stepped foot into the fortress, a strand of light, of hope, seemed to stray into that dark place. On the faces of those which had so long been gloomy, smiles appeared. He was loved by all, and it was not long till that love brought him to a new height. Yet, even in his new position, he reminded them that he was no tyrant, no ruling king. He was their humble servant, and would do his best to serve.
Still, tales were quickly created by minstrels, bards, and others. Most saw him as a god descended from above but there were other views also. Regardless, his fame was unrivaled in those mountains. It was admirable indeed.
 
Thanks for the apps guys! I literally have to go out right now, but I will read them over when I get back!

Schnitzel, thanks for your kind offer, but I have been talking to Ayers4569, and he has already agreed to build the bard HQ.
 
Thanks for the applications guys, I have appointed you both the rank of Bard!

As for you Adam, send me the story you used as your previous application and you will be welcomed back into the fold!
 
My Bard application

How the Dwarves lost Mithrilion
Foreword: Once upon a time, there was a great city, far up in the north - the city of Mithrilion. The dwarves that dwelled there were known as great warriors of brute strength and infinite courage. Legend has it that they were descendants of a warrior god by the name of Gandor. Due to the great riches the dwarves carved out of the mountain's stone, Mithrilion had, throughout the decades, become the center of northern trading. -

> "Are you sure we should be doing this?" Prince Dwain dug his foot into a crack in the stone and pulled himself up onto the battlement roofing, where his brother was already waiting for him. "Why not?", Thain asked. At that very moment, a piece of stone beneath Dwain's foot broke out of the wall. He managed to grab the roof's edge and pull himself back up. "Dammed, I told you it's dangerous!", he called out angrily. "Well, the danger is worth it. Look!" The two princes gazed at the most amazing sight of Mithrilion they had ever seen.
Dwain was the oldest son of King Turin, the Lord of Mithrilion. As a future king, he had to spend most of his time at the training hall, which had made him a well accomplished warrior with sword and axe. Thain had always lived a life in ease, knowing that it would never change as his brother was to be king. Beloved by the ladies for his fascinating hair and good education, he was not only a master of the sword, although not quite as good as his brother in close combat, but also a delicate archer.
It had rained overnight, and the stone roofs were glimmering in the rising sun. "Beautiful", Thain wispered. Then he frowned. "What is that?" Dwain turned to see a rock hurl towards them. Without hestitating, he knocked Thain of the roof and jumped after him, as the roof was shattered into thousands of stone shards behind him. The two boys landed in the moat as more rocks followed the first one, penetrating the battlements. A citizen helped them out of the water. "What are you doing here?" "What do you mean?", Dwain asked. "The city is under attack, you should be inside the stronghold!", The man answered. The stronghold's gates were open and the citizens were spilling into the entrance hall. "You should go inside now, my lords." The princes nodded and followed the crowd into the mountain. As the gate closed, they saw a legion of ugly creatures break into the city and swarm into the houses. Then, there was silence.
Dwain and Thain sprinted to the weaponry and put on their equipment. While Dwain took a sword in his right and his axe in his left hand, Thain belted a sword and took hold of a shortbow and a quiver lying on a table. They left the weaponry and joined the soldiers on the battlement. "Your father and the Mithril Guard have not yet arrived." Commander Borim was a large, muscular dwarf with a beard longer than anything you have ever seen. He was a loyal servant of the royal family and, although in his 230's, a great warrior. "What are these creatures?", Dwain asked. "Orcs.", the Commander answered. "The world's biggest scum has come to take our riches." At that moment, the king arrived. He was dressed in a gleaming white armor made of mithril, as were his elite soldiers, the Mithril Guard. "No one shall harm our citizens!", he called out.
At that very moment, an arrow hit his face, boring into his head. The king was of such strength, he just kept standing, although he was already dead. The assailant was a sergant up on the wall. "Fire at will! Kill them all!", he shouted. "The Great Goblin will pay us well!" A hail of arrows rained down onto the citizens, shedding rivers of blood onto the stone floor. Thain took cover behind a pillar and started firing, while Dwain and Borim, who were on the battlement next to the archers, tryed to attack. But the traitors were large in number and many arrows pierced Borim's armor, who had thrown himself infront of Dwain. "You have to flee!" he called out before he stumbled backwards and fell of the battlement, peppered with arrows. Dwain took down a few archers, before an arrow hit him in the shoulder. He fought on, but a second one caught him at the waist. He turned around and ran, just to get hit in the back by a third one that knocked him off his feet. Thain gave him fire protection as he managed to get up and stumble into cover. "We have to go!", Thain cryed out. "We have to go now!" Dwain nodded and Thain fired his last arrow, then took his brother's arm over his shoulder and carried him away. The enemies were so distracted by the citizens still alive that the princes managed to escape the entrance hall and slip into the healing chambers. Thain ripped the arrows out of Dwain's body and bandaged him as fast as he could. Then they headed for the secret passage.
Dwain looked back. The city was burning in wild flames, and the orcs were dragging the citizens out onto the streets to kill them. "Don't look back", Thain said. "There's nothing we could have done for them." Dwain sighed and turned away from the terrifying scene. The two brothers headed south, in the hope of finding help in the realm of the men. Little did they know what would be awaiting them there.
 
I don't see why you're asking me to apply again, and who made you incharge? I'm pretty sure Beepbobit didn't ask you to make a thread where people can apply to be in the bards and all the members need to apply again.
 
If thats all, then sure you can! Also, I have your application, excellent story!

Adam, why is it so much of a problem to post one story? All the confirmed members have been re added instantly.
 
The Armies of Snow!
A long long time ago, in a land far away, the armies of the Snow kingdom form ranks. Standing before the gates of Hell, the Snowmen make no move, besides the occasional tear soaking into the black, charred ground. Once again these soldiers, made of solid H2O, advance upon the fearsome Demons- Creatures with reddish skin, emitting a dark aura- but this time they were led by human warriors. With a single blast of a horn, the hundreds of Snowmen charge forward, launching balls of snow at the six Demons. The small group of warriors charges with them, firing arrows (which did much more then snowballs!) "Split!" An order is repeated. The groups of snowmen move out, separating into different battalions. Though the snowballs didn't do much to the demons, they sure did annoy them! A few demons were surrounded in waves of snow, right by ruined towers of old. The humans climbed up, swinging their heavy swords at the beasts. One shrieked out in range, blasting ranks of humans and snowmen to smithereens. Tons of snowmen were melted, but eventually a human climbed onto the demons back, stabbing it several times to the ground. Again it screamed, sending the human flying off of itself, but mist was soon seeping from the wounds. It's bones fall to the ground, nothing but that remaining. The Armies of Snow repeated this tactic several times, until only a few demons remained. By then all the snowmen had melted, leaving only humans- Or so they thought. The humans hid under structures of stone, managing to stay alive despite the heavy artillery the demons were now launching. Then more horns blew. Thousands of snow balls flew into the sky, coating the Hellish beats with white powder! The reinforcements had arrived, and with them, came the death of the demons. The armies now advanced forward... For the capital of the Demons!
After setting up fortifications in front of the capital, the Armies of Snow watch as the gates of Hell are opened, and thousands of creatures are released. Again the demons come, but this time they were joined by lesser demons- Only one head, but fire covered most of their bodies. They shot fire at the ranks of snowmen, who had only recently arrived from their own lands, melting several on the spot. The humans take cover behind their walls, letting the trenches and Men of Snow take the brunt of the damage. "Wait out the lesser demons..." They're told, keeping hidden. But soon, a loud cackle was heard, and a man was seen amongst the demons. He slams his staff into the ground, and creatures- figures of humans, but green, and much more ugly- rise from the ground! They and the demons of fire charge forward, melting most of the snowmen by themselves. Now it was time for the other Demons to advance- The ones fought in the first battle. Six of them fly forward, sending blasts of fire into the stone walls of the Humans. But every action has an equal and opposite reaction! The few surviving snowmen move to distract them, chucking snowballs at the beasts, while the Humans jump out of their fortifications. Some fire arrows, while others move under, swinging their swords at the feet of the demons. This continues for awhile, until they're met with silence... All the demons were dead.
The Armies of Snow were victorious! For now...
(Electric asked me to make a post. I did so.)
 
Beep is gone, never to return I fear. Power over the Bards is given to those who take the initiative, in this case, KingJoe.
 
Arakrsptec, your application has also been accepted, thank you!

It appears to me that we have enough actual story, writing bards now, so I'm going to halt this particular recruitment drive, and begin work on the next big bard thing....
 
Hey guys, do you still have spots open? Because the past week or so I have been working on a process writing, a poem, and now I'm in the middle of a story, and I don't want my hard work to be abolished due to not enough spots D:
 
Yo, king!

I´d like to be added as a bard if that was possible:

http://www.empirewar.org/forums/m/5312442/viewthread/13041098-poem-frost-army (greatly acclaimed if i do say so myself)

and

http://www.empirewar.org/forums/m/5312442/viewthread/21070762-snippets-poetry
 
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