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Ventures into the Remote (Intro)

Awesome, best of luck for you Cap. Good luck for your grades and studies my friend. As long as you're gone I'll try to improve my roleplay-skills and jea, If you start a new one, or make a spin off whenever the current rp ends: count me in Cap. at first I was like: hm... should I try it? But now I'm totally in, it's just so awesome to rp with you guys and jea, thanks for the cool story that we have right now and thanks for the cool storys that might come.
 
UPDATE:

My exams begin next week on the 2nd of May and last until the 25th of May. The night of the 25th shall be the re-opening of ViTR RP.

Before we go forward I want to give people the chance to apply for new characters.
What I mean by this is, if you have friends or those you know who want to join, they may create a character to join the RP. Already established characters CANNOT create new characters or have a second one as of now. That will likely change in the future.

New characters must follow the already established character format on page 1 as well as be relatively up to date on the story. Furthermore, new characters are limited to being slaves and thus must be of the race of men either Gondorian, Umbar, Haradrim, Easterling or Khanding. They also will have the choice of being introduced immediately among the current roleplayers or better yet being introduced at a later stage in the RP and given an interesting event role. PM me for the latter choice.

Remember, being a slave means your character is malnourished and likely lacking in abilities at the current point. They also cannot be jaw-dropping princes or magnificent chieftains. They must be of low to mid-class and can be warriors captured into slavery or rather just born into slavery.

If you have any comments or questions please drop them below and I'll answer as soon as possible. Anything you'd like to know.

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BIG note:

Chapter 3 will introduce themes that have only lightly been hinted at throughout the previous chapters. These are majorly mature themes such as intense violence, extreme gore, and sex. What I mean by the latter one is that characters shall experience, view or may end up in a sexual situation. If you're worried about this being too detailed, don't be. Any 'sex scenes' shall be heavily censored due to the rules of this forum.
 
If you find a reason to.

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Roleplayer: 9842Kye
Character name: Ha'zi Mor
Age: 15
Character race: Haradrim/Southron
Character family: Dace Mor (Mother, deceased), Lod Mor (Father, DRUNK; deceased)
Character morals: Wants to help others, cares for family
Character design: Tall dark-skinned boy with long dark hair. Has a large bruise above his eye
Character weapons: none
Character backstory: Earlier this year, Ha'zi's mother passed from a violent illness that took her in her sleep. Ever since, he and his dad, Lod, have been trying to manage life and financial troubles as Lod and Dace both worked jobs as merchants to help obtain food, clothing, and shelter for their family. So, Ha'zi and his father have been working hard for money. Ha'zi got a job in delivery. During this time, Lod developed a drinking problem. Ha'zi and his dad had a few fallouts during this time. Lod, while drunk, would sometimes attack and blame Ha'zi for their troubles after his late deliveries. Meanwhile, Ha'zi would tend to have really late deliveries because they are so frequent and far, so there would be times he sleeps in and misses them to regain energy. His last delivery, however, knowing that his family really needed this money and that it all depended on him, got up earlier and headed off. He was making good time, being nearly half way there, when the sandstorm hit. It slowed him down for hours and it was so blinding, that he lost direction a few times because he couldn't see his compass. But, he kept going on. When the storm died down, he readjusted his route and continued. Finally, he arrived at the merchant's house, and knocked on the door, package in hand. When the merchant arrived at the door, he slapped Ha'zi, hard, knocking him to the ground with the package. The merchant berated the boy, telling him he was five hours late. In reality, however, he was only 1 hour late, but the merchant wanted to see how the boy would react. Ha'zi went down on his knees, pleading to the merchant that he pay him, for his family had none. The merchant decided to be sympathetic.... with an ulterior motive, of course. After going back inside, he returned with a bag and dropped it in front of Ha'zi, saying it would be enough to get rid of his family's debt. The only reason he did this however, was to boost his reputation--- wouldn't everyone love the person who so generously helped a child in need even though he failed his delivery? Ha'zi, in total shock, quickly thanked the merchant and went off, knowing he had to return quickly because of the man saying he was five hours late.
When he returned late at night, Ha'zi , bag in hand, went straight to his father, happily telling him the news. However, his father had a different reaction. He punched Ha'zi in the forehead, drunkily thinking that Ha'zi was going to keep the money for himself, and grabbed the bag of coins. He shouted at Ha'zi, wrongly criticizing him for his greed, and this is where he broke.So, Lod dragged Ha'zi, sobbing, to the slaver place and gave him away. Ha'zi watched in disbelief as his father walked away, and held a small golden coin with a silver edge that fell out of the coin bag when he was knocked down. He thinks, "Why would my father do this? There must be something wrong with him... but why would he give me, his only son, away into slavery?" He looks at the coin again, and notices that the rays of light from the barred window in his cell hit the silver lining, giving it an extra shine with the gold and silver. Dazzled at the brightness of it, he thinks, "Maybe there is still some good left.... That merchant... he helped me, even when i clearly messed up... Maybe father made a mistake... he will come back for me..." He nods off to sleep, with both of his over the coin, holding tightly.
Late that night, Lod came to realize what had happened when he grew more sober. He went to the slave hold and demanded to the seller that he made a mistake, that he needed to see his son. The man laughed and said, "You will have to give a better offer than mistakes and love. Come back when you have actual currency." After that, he gave a wave to the guards, who began to march towards Lod to take him outside. Suddenly, he exclaimed, "Wait! I do have money!" He pulled out the money the merchant gave him and tossed it to the seller, who eyed it, interested. "Well, i have an offer then, as this money, although very grand, would not be enough to cover your boy's dues. So, if you care very much for him, here is your deal: Best one of my men in a duel, and you will get your son and your money. But if you lose, you will have both taken from you, along with your life." After little thought to this, Lod nods (wow, rhythm) and accepts this. The seller snaps, and his largest guard appears, a brute named Medzo. Then, Medzo and Lod are marched to the front of the hold, and are each given a scimitar. Then, the duel begins. Medzo's first move is to charge wildly straight at Lod, who barely dodges, getting knocked on the ground. Medzo wildly strikes down at Lod, whom is cut deeply on the arm, then kicks the brute, hard, in the chest, knocking him a few feet away. Lod manages to get up when Medzo comes at him again, this time with even more energy, and stabs Lod right in the chest, the weapon going all the way through the other side. Medzo looks down on him victoriously, and whoops and cheers. When he goes to his retrieve his sword, however, Lod uses the last of his strength to quickly plunge his weapon into Medzo, impaling him, too. Soon, both men die to each other's blades...
Ha'zi is woken by a deep scream from outside and, rubbing his eyes, looks outside to see two dead people being carried away. When he looks at the body of his father, he does not recognize him, for his face is bruised and covered in blood. He feels sorry for the men, and nods off to sleep...
 
[user avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/9842Kye/74.png" name="9842Kye"]16315828[/user] Accepted.
Ha'zi has been on the slave ship for 5 months. He is one of the many slaves to be freed in Chapter 2 of VitR and currently is with his slave-family onboard, dropping supplies off. Ha'zi is friends with Lezier, another Haradrim slave who was injured in the fight for the ship. Both he and Ha'zi were sold into slavery around the same time. Lezier as he was useless, unable to work and without a family, was sold into slavery by his master. He is an older man yet still fights on and encourages Ha'zi to. Both Ha'zi and Lezier share dreams of returning to their motherland and speak in Haradrim, of which Deslan understands. Although, Lezier has such optimistic hopes they are merely hopes. Nothing more. Deslan knows this. Yet, Ha'zi in his youthful ignorance does not and honestly believes they will return home and he will find his father. That is where Ha'zi shall be joining the story.

[user avatar="https://assets-cloud.enjin.com/users/6427581/avatar/small.1500927951.jpeg" name="Riko son of Pdor son of Kmer"]6427581[/user] ((You and Kye can decide whether or not to have a friendship between your characters.))
 
I never thought about the fact that our characters might have different languages. Will Deslan need to translate what they say, or do they speak Westron as well?
 
I guess dwarves and dalesman will understand each other, but you're right, like haradrim might have another "language" than for example dwarves. But in the movies most factions can understand each other, even orcs.
(e.g: thranduil and the orc in his halls who talk to each other about the dwarves)
Despite all the english language-stuff this could be interesting. They could like speak in their language and tell something not everybody should know.
 
Ha'zi speaks Haradrim as he is a young teen and coming from a poor family will likely have no access to education, possibly even basic education like mathematics. He likely began understanding different languages whilst aboard as a slave among the others. He probably picked up some Westron from the Gondorians aboard like Dean, Sam, Marco and Elodrin as well as some Easterling from Celeste and others. For RP purposes Ha'zi can speak SIMPLE Westron but would prefer his native tongue. He can fully understand Westron and his accent dilutes his punctuation, making it difficult for him to fluently pronounce words.

As Ha'zi continues to be around a Westron-based speaking group he will continue to further his Westron speaking ability. However, for now he is limited to basic words and sentences such as, "What?" and "How?"
To speak in complex sentence forms he MUST have either Lesier or Deslan translate for him.

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[user avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/assassiniv/74.png" name="assassiniv"]14628767[/user] Iver is limited to Westron (the common tongue) and some Easterling. However, he understands Khuzul (dwarven tongue).

[user avatar="https://assets-cloud.enjin.com/users/16311516/avatar/small.1517585379.jpeg" name="Gundabad1"]16311516[/user] The Crimson Beard knows: Khuzul and Westron as well as understanding some Sindarin, Northmen (Rhovanion men) and Orcish. He is fluent in all forms of Khuzul including that spoken by the Orocarni dwarves.
 
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Join the discord. It's 'fun'.
https://discord.gg/RsZKAU
 
[user avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/Captain_Aasim/74.png" name="Captain_Aasim"]12253360[/user] "Some Easterling" I'm offended :mad:
 
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Join the discord. It's 'fun'.
https://discord.gg/RsZKAU
Guh my phone doesn't have enough space to download it
 
[user avatar="https://cravatar.eu/helmavatar/CluckmanTheDerp/74.png" name="CluckmanTheDerp"]13527980[/user] Use it on your pc. If you can't it's fine. You've just missed out on a lot of discussion and updates which are posted to the discord server.
 
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